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Old 10-17-2009, 10:40 AM
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''Am i dead or am i alive'' Those where the first thoughts i made when i
regained concieness.I didnt know if was alive or dead but i could feel
a big pain in my head.I couldnt open my eyes due to the pain but as waited i
regained power.
Once i had the power i tried to open them.Openning my eyes went from complete
Darkness to complete light.It was obvius that i haddent openned my eyes for a
long time.I waited to get used to the light and than i looked around only to see
a man in Black.I was in a room along with empty beds.It was pretty clear i was
alive.

''So you are awake'' he said.

I was tired and i couldnt speak.I tried as hard as i could to speak but it was clear
that i needed to rest.And to top it all of the pain in my head refused to leave.
He than started speaking.

''I am guessing you are feeling a pain in your head.Its because your brain is
regaining memmories.You'll get used to it''

Indeed i got used to it.The pain was away in about 1 minute.
But i was confused.What did he mean by ''Regaining'' memmories.
It was than when i realised one thing.I couldnt remember who i was.
I couldnt remember almost anything.
I hoped that he would give me some answers.He continued on saying:

''You must be really confused right?Where are you,Who am i,What happened
during you were asleep and most importantly who are you''

He seemed to know the answers.I once again tried to speak and i managed to
ask him
''What happened''

''You will learn soon.Everything will be revealed to you.You just need to wait''
He smiled and then said to me
''You should rest for now.Its gona be a very tiresome day when you wake up''
He said and than procceded to leave the room.

After he left i started to think...What kind of ~~~~ did i get my self into...
I saw a clock on the wall.It was 1:32 after midnight.
What was he doing waiting for me.
That night i couldnt sleep.Everytime i tried to sleep i would see bloody faces
screaming and loud bang noices.I had nightmares all night.Its time i slept i
saw monstocitys devouring people.But by the most frighting thing of all
was that it all seemed familiar.Like i had expirianced such a thing before...

The next morning i woke up.I Immidiatly felt the headache i had the day before.
''Argg...Not again''
After a minute it passed away.I was wondering why i had the same pain when
the man in black from the day before walked it the room.He looked relaxed and
was hold some sort of drink.

''Good morning Adreas''he said.
''So Adreas is my name? I asked him.
''Yes it is.''He said with a smile in his face.
''You can call me Jason for now.By the way...Can you move''

I had many questions but i decided to hear him.I moved my body around
without a problem.

''Ok than.Lets try to get up''
I tried to move from my bed but it was hard.He assisted me and with his i
managed to get up.After that i had problems moving but that was my least of my
worrys.
''Can i get some anwers now.Who am i and what the hell i am doing here'' i said.
''Calm down tiger'' he said in a light tone
"You will get your answers.But until then go get your self a bath because you
smell awfull as hell''

He than Called he's assistents.Two female womans came it and helped me
go get a bath.AS i exitted the room i found my self in a huge hall.
There where guards and what looked to be sciencints walking around.
''Where the hell am i'' i thought to my self.
We moved around the huge hall but i was getting tired.I said to the female
assistents to let me sit somewhere.We found a sofa and rested there.

I took a look around the big hall but the first thing that cought my attention was
the huge screen that displayied something.
There i saw in one of the paragraphs it said
''Today is December 22th 2012''
I stared on the screen confused by what i had seen.
I couldnt believe what i have seen.But it was true.It is christmas on 2012.
The problem was that last time i was awake it was 2010...
''Have i been asleep for... 2 years...''

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As i sit down to take a huge breath i begin to wonder what happened.
Why is this all happening and why cant i remember who i am.
I tried i think but one of the assistents tell me we need to go.
I vagely agree and i follow them.

''How can this be possible.''I thought to my self while following them.
''It must be a mistake''
I speak to the assistents saying:
''Can you tell me what year is it'' i asked.
She looks at me with a rather strange look and she tell me smiling:
''Its December of 2012'' she tells me.

At this point i am confused as all hell.I can barely move due to this.
What the hell happened here.

I decided that it would be more stressless if i just ignored what i saw.
We reached the bath and the 2 woman told me to take a bath.
They left the bath for me to relax.The room was bright and huge.
I was suprised that i was the only one in the shower.

I took of my clothes off and i went to see my face in the mirror.
What i saw kinda made me sad.I saw my self covvered in black Beard and hair.
I looked more like a caveman than a modern human.To top it all of my hair was
Full of dirt.I couldnt watch my self anymore and i decided to cut my hair.

I shaved almost all of my beard and i cutted with a sciccor my hair so i can look
like a proper human.Good thing for hygiene.After that i took a look at the mirror
again.I finnally saw my true self but it wasnt that good of a sight.
I was pale with scars of some sort.But still it was better than my previus self.

I started taking a shower.I was again shocked on how much dirt came out of my
body.At the end of course i came out as a completly different person.
It kinda made me wonder why hadent i seen that i had that much of a hair.

I also couldnt stand my previus clothes.They where Blue pijamas full of dirt
and hair.I asked the assistents to give me new clothes.They Bringed me
A Decent T shirt and some black Pants.To top it all of they bringed me a
a Black lovely Tuque.

I came out of that bathroom a completly new man feeling refreshed.
It was like drinking a red bull to give you energy.I was escorted to some sort
of cafeteria.The cafeteria was really big with a refreshing feel into it.Several
people where there talking and eating.It was at this time that i said to my self.
"Dam i am freaking hungry'' I went into the counter and i picked my food from a
sign.Eggrolls is what i wanted.

I sitted down and i ate it like a maniac.It enjoyied everysecond of my food.
The problem was that i was skinny as hell so i asked for some more.
I ended up eatting a whole plates full of eggrolls.

At his point i just couldnt ignore it anymore.I wanted answers and i wanted them
badly.I was escorted to jason who was sitting on a table in a big white room.

''Take a sit'' he said.
I sitted down and he started saying
''You clearly look more like a human being.How was your trip on the complex.''
I responded with
''Can you end the bull~~~~ now and start telling me what the ~~~~ is going on
here'' i said in a hostile way.
''Shouting will not get you anywhere Adrea.Allow me to explain''
He standed up and he started explain.

''You have been in a state of coma for the last 2 years.Its now december of 2012'
''I already know that.I saw a screen saying that'' i responded.
''Theres more Adrea.Theres a lot more for you to learn.

When he said that 2 armed guards came in and locked the door behind me.
It was clear that he wanted protection.
And it must be ~~~~ important if you need protection just to explain something.

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I took a good look on Jason and told him.
''Go ahead,make my day''
''Before we get into the meat of the matter i need to explain something''
He said with a somewhat light tone.
''What you will hear may break you a little inside.With that said il start giving you
answers.''
I took a look around me to see the 2 guards looking at me carefully ,inspecting
my moves.
''2 years ago you entered a cruiser but not a normal cruiser.
This cruiser was the CRS Hercules 1, the worlds biggest cruiser.''He said.

He than pulled some pictures from his pocket an showed them to me.
I saw a cruiser bigger than 20 Battleships together.Big,beautiful and an
technological and architectal achievement.

''You entered that cruiser on 30 of December along with 600.000 other people.In
the cruiser where 20000 tons of equipment and supplies.
The ship was suppused to start on 30 of december 2010 starting from England
and ending on England again on 25th of December 2012.
It would travel the world in 1 year going through all the continets of the world''

I was listening very carefully.I memorised everything he said.Word by word.

''It would make only one stop and that was on Florida in the March of 23.
But something happened'' he said in a sad tone.

At this point i was really anxious on what he was saying.

''On the 23 of March The CRS Hercules 1 entered the Port of Florida.Helicopters
Of the national Navy where shocked by what they saw.Spread out on the ship
where thousends of corpses shatred around.But that wasnt enough.
There where people there and they seemed to be...eatting the corpses.''

''Eatting them?'' I asked in a slightly fearfull tone.

''Yes eatting them''he responded
''But that wasnted enough.Shortly after entering the port we recieved 2 signals.
The first one said 2 words ''CODE BLACK,CODE BLACK CO...'' before ending.''

''What is Code Black'' i asked now kinda frighten.
''We use Code black in case of a Virus or a really big radioactive threat that may
be epidemic.''He said in a sad way.
''Code Black is really dangarous.It explain of a virus so big that it can trigger
an epidemic or radioactive waste that can affect areas big as the Chernobyl.
Now imagene something big as that landing on a port with thousends of people.''

''Didnt anyone stop the ship?''I asked now Frigthen as all hell.

''The Cruiser was controlled by a combuter.It had predetermed instructions and
it was going to be automatically going to stop and open on the port.''

I was speachless at this point of the conversation.I couldnt speak or do
anything.I felt alone and scared.

''We didnt have any choices.We had to options.One was detonate the ship while
the other was to enter the ship and clean the threat.The one was the easy way
while the other was the hard way'' he explained.

''Hold on.You where willing to put explosives on a Cruiser the size of a town
While millions where looking.Also what was the second signal that you
recieved.''I asked him in a angry tone.

''We werent.It Was the decision of the President of the USA and the a couple of
Generals.Fortunatly the president decided not to Blow the hell out of the cruiser
and contacted an operation to clean up the mess'' he explained.

''Couldnt you stop it.Couldnt you use some machine to stop the combuter from
landing on the port'' I asked frighten.

''No we couldnt.The Combuter was predetermed and was programmed to do so.
The only thing we could do is slow it down.And thats what we did.We managed
to slow down the engines as much as we could at a point where it would take
a week to land on the port.1 week to get in,clean the cruiser and get out.''

''Ok so where do i fit in this operation'' I asked

''You sure have a lot of questions.Dont you remembed what i said.You where on
the ship.Not only that but you where the only survivor.

The moment he said that i fell into a shock.I looked at him confused.
''The only survivor out of the 600.000 people aboard'' i thought to my self.
It was simply mindblowing.What caused so many poeple to die.Why
did i survive and they did not.

Jason continued:
''I can understand you are shocked...well you werent the only survivor''
I immidiatly took a good look on him and i asked.

''Who else survived?'' i asked in an angry tone.
When i said that the two guards came closer to me to be more causious.
They wouldnt want me to become agressive.

''There where 2 other people with you when you where rescued.
''The first one died on a hospital shortly after he's rescue and the other
was a baby.
''A baby?'' I asked
''Yes a baby.You where all rescued on the top of the control tower,the highest
point on the cruiser,shortly before the cruiser was filled with Deadly gas and
cleanned''

''So what do you want from me'' i asked in disgust.
''We want to know what happened in the ship while you where there.
What happened that killed 600.000 poeple and how did you survive''.He said
''And why do you ask me.I barely even remember my name'' i responded
''Well exept from being asleep for 2 years you also have lost a big chank of your
memory''.

''Didnt i make that clear already Jason''
''Theres more to that''he said pulling some sort of pill out of his pocket.
He continued on:

''This is a memory pill.It hasnt been on the market yet.
''And what does it do'' i asked.

''Well,as the name implies it restores the memory of a person.You see memories
arent lost when they are forgotten they are simply stored on your Brain.
The pill simply uncovers them and makes your remember.
This pill was first used to make emploeys remember where they left their stuff or
keys.It was later used to solve murders. Kinda better than a physotherapist dont
you think''

He said with a smile.
I of course wasnt smiling.At all.
''You will take this pill 2 times a day.One at day and one at night.It will help you
restore your memory and uncover what the hell happened in that place.
Until than go in your room and take the pill.''

I standed up and i prepared to leave.What i have heard from this man changed
me completly.Now i knew what kind of ~~~~ i was into.

And to top it all of...i cant remember my last name.

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I apologise for this small and rather pointless scene.Its more of a
character development and to show what happened while Adrea was away.
With that said enjoy.
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I exitted the room to go and get a drink.I was shaken up from what
i have heard.

''I need a drink'' i thought to my self.
''Can i go to the cafeteria and drink something'' I asked to the Guards.
They allowed it and escorted me to the cafeteria.

When we arrived i saw vending machines and told them i was gona take
something from the vending machines and sit down to a sofa.They again allowed
me.

I went to the vending machine but the vending machine didnt have any bottons.
I looked all over the machine but i couldnt any place to select a drink
While i was looking at the vending machine Jason came in too take a drink too.

''Trying to select a drink hah'' he said with a smile.
''Well this is the future so things are ought to be different'' i responded.

''See that Screen there'' he said pointing with his finger.
''Thats a Touch screen.You select a drink from there.
''And where do i put the coin''

''You dont.The combuter regognises your finger prints and lets you have one drink
a day.But be carefull.When we say one drink we mean ONE drink'' he said.

''Wow...are all vending machines like that?''
''Of course not.This kind of vending machines are only found on companys or
complexes like this one.If all machine were like that the soda and drinks market
would have crushed long ago.

''Oh i see...by the way i almost forgot.What was the second signal they sended.

Jason took a look on my and said:
''The second signal is currently classified.It will only be revealed to you when we
want it to be''

''Ok than.Il just go and relax for now''. I said while selecting a Energy drink.
The machine quickly sended out a energy drink.
I was suprised to see McDonald's Lable on the energy drink.
I turned to Jason and asked him :
''When did McDonald's start making Energy drinks''

Jason turned around and said:
''They started doing that on the start of 2011.It happened when the World
economy nearlly collapsed.Several companys where sold,thousends where
closed.Only a few managed to survive.Sony,Microsoft,Intel and that kind of stuff''

''How's the economy now''I asked worried.
''It is far from collapsed.It has been restored to a decent level.You know
explaining what happened during you where asleep will take me ages.Just sit
down and enjoy your drink.''

As he said that he left me to enjoy my little energy drink.So much have changed
while i was awake.So much that i dont think i will be able to fit in this community.

I sitted down in a sofa and i started drinking my energy drink.
I was so tired that i drinked the entire energy drink in 30 seconds.
Than i started thinkin to my self:
''Maybe it should be best for me to try and get along.Not to worry about
what happened during my sleep''.

It was the best thing i could do for now.But than i remembered.

...the memory pill...

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I went to the guards and i told them i wanted to go to my room.
They enscorted me there in less than 5 minutes.I didnt want to do this
to my self but i didnt have any other choices.

We reached the room and i told the guards to leave me alone.
I was about to take the pill and realise what happened.As i pulled the pill
out of my pocket i began to be a little frighten.Jason didnt tell me anything else
than to take the pill.

Should i drink water with it?Do i shallow it or do i eat it?
My instict told me to take it with water and to shallow it.
Maybe that wouldnt be a good idea but I was so anxious to remember what
happened that i decided to trust my instict.

''Hey guards,can you get me a Bottle of water'' i asked.

The Guard Signed and went of to take a Bottle of water.He came later with it.
He gave it to me with a rather tiring way and left the room.

''Those guys dont like me that much i thought to my self'' I thought to my self.

I took a good look on the Pill on more time before swallowing it.
I drinked some water and i sitted on the bed waiting for something to happen.

After a couple of minutes my head started to hurt.As i waited more and more
the Pain became more intense.I couldnt take it anymore so i decided to take a
small nap.

When i fell asleep i started dreaming...I saw a my self boarding along what
looked to be a ship.I was with a lot of other poeple.I gave my password to
the recepionist and i boarded the ship.There was some kind of Sad feel to me.
Like i was sad of entering the ship.

That didnt last long...Once i entered the ship i started seing coprses.
Corpses on the walls,floors,on the tables.It was a sight that could make
even the toughtest of man Puke.

Than i saw what looked like the faces i saw the other night.Monstrocitys
devoring other man.But most importanly i saw a little girl pickings on a mans
chest.The man had all of his head open and the girl was eatting he's eye.
Picking the internal nevers and eating them like spaggetti.

At this point i could take it too long.I waked up in a state of shock.
I was sweating from every point of my body.
I took a look on the clock only to see that it was 5:52.I didnt know when
i fell asleep but it could have been 2 good hours.
But than i remembered something.A name.
''Adreas Theodorakis'' i thought to my self.
''That must be my name.''

The pill had worked.It made me not only remember my name but also my some of
the thing i used to do.I didnt know what those where but i could clearly remembe
certain things.I also felt more refreshed than ever.

''The goddam thing worked.'' I thought to my self in excitiment.

While i was celebrating my victory over the lost memory one of the female
assistents from before and told me:

''Oh your awake.Jason wants to see you later.Allow me to excort you there''She
said
''Its ok i know where he is'' i said with a smile on my face.

I headed down the hall but i realised that the two guards from before
where following me.I stopped and asked them why do they follow me around that
much.

''Jason has putted as as your personal bodyguards and servants.If anything
happens to you,it will be our faults''One of the guards responded.
''Of course'' i thought to my self.

I continued down the huge hall and i reached the room Jason and i were in
before.I openned the door only to see Jason talking to what looked like to
be Scientists.
Jason noticed me and said:

''Oh,here is the first person i gave it too''he said to the other scientists pointint at
me with he's finger.
''Come and take a sit'' Jason said reffering to me.

I sitted down on the steel chair and i waited what Jason was going to do.
After a few seconds Jason told asked me:

''Can you tell me your name"
''Dont you already Know it" i responded.
''I was reffering to your full name'' he said.
''My name is Adreas Theodorakis.'' i said.

I than saw one of the scientists Smile out of joy.

Jason continied:
''What did you mostly eat before your sleep'' He asked again.
I looked at him and i responded:
''I really used to eat eggroll when i was with memory"

The scientist Smiled even more.You could see that he was ready to
burst into tears of Joy.I quickly thought that maybe this was the person that
invented the pill.
Jason asked me one last question:

"Finnally do you know where you were born" he asked with a smile.

I took waited some time to think of the question before answering the question:

"I was born on Thesaloniki on the 6th of July 1984"I said

At this point the Scientist screamed YES!!! and hugged one of his fellow workers.
I then asked:
''Can i learn why this is so big of a deal.Jason told me that these pills have
been used for some time."i asked.
Jason was about to speak but he was outspoken by the scientist.

''Well you see until recently the pill only worked on normal people.People that
had expirianced an accident that made them Amnestiacs where completly
unaffected by the pill.I was working on this project for some time now
and managing to succedd is one of the greatest thing i have ever done!!!''

Jason decided to take me out of the room and let the scientists celebrate their
victory.

"Excuse his rather childish behavior.He is kinda new here." Jason said.
"I understand.But I have another question" i responded.
''Shoot it"
''Why is the second signal so classified"
"Its the reason why we dont reveal most of the gaverment secrets.
Simply you cant haddle the truth.The Signal will only be Revealed when we want
it to be revealed" Jason said in a rather agreessive tone.

He stopped for a brief second and said again:

"Sorry about the Agreesive behavior.Lets just say i had a rather bad day at the
office''. He said.

He said that and he left me to the gaurds.He really didnt want me to learn
about the second signal.Maybe the second signal is connected with me.

I didnt think about it to much because i wanted to go to the cafeteria.
I aint workign until i get something to eat.

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I am a little tired right now so i will continue the story tommorow.

Can you tell me what do you think of the story while i think what will happen next.
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Seems like you have a good story but there are to be blunt, waaaaay too many grammer mistakes and spelling errors, which makes it hard to get into the plot of the story.
You should write your documents in word or at least, copy and paste everything into word and use "Spell Check" and it will all be done for you.

Good story, keep on writing but just be careful of the errors.
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