Making a small comedy series: Shambling around - episode 1

[Paramore]

Hey guys,

Im writing up small comedy series for youtube / my student site.

'Shambling around' focuses on the lives of two zombies after the human race as been wiped out. The couple realise that they only ever seem to be shambling around, and realise that they don;t have any ambitions any more, and no real goal in life, now that the humans are dead. It also focuses on everyday normal occurances for zombies

The parts in green = The game he will be playing is zombie panic, and the ingame footage will be one zombie, being chased by 18 survivors with melee weapons, and eventually getting him cornered.

Episode 1:

(scene starts showing two zombies in a room where one is playing a video game, and the other looking bored)

zombie 1: argh, im so bored .... hey remember the time when we used to hunt down the last remaining human populations, man that was fun

zombie 2 (playing video game): Huh? what you saying?

zombie 1: Im saying now that the humans are dead it's just soo.... boring, theres no goal in life, no overall ambition .... we just shamble around for a few hours outside then come and play video games

zombie 2: I guess so, but hey at least the human food industry is booming. Speaking of which, fancy ordering a pizza

Zombie 1: yeh sure why not (sarcastically/bored) .... (rings up) Hey KFHuman? yeh you ok to deliver? great cool, can we have a brain pizza extra cheese please

Zombie 2: (gets z1 notice) See if they have an human finger strips

Zombie 1: hey you got any strips? yeh cool can i have a hand and a half worth of strips ..... aaaaaaand just some garlic sauce, yep thats all, ok thanks

Zombie 2 (playing video game): o no im surrounded .... (gets killed) .... god ~~~~it

Zombie 2: It's a shame th humans didn't put up this much of a fight in real life

Zombie 1: tru that

**** END SCENE ****

The sketch itself should resemble an over exaggerated setting (with the zombies taking over) but still resembling a reality that we all know and can relate to, such as ordering pizza, playing video games, ordering extra cheese. These things help keep it grounded and let the humour and irony of the situation come out. Also imagine the voices as my voice, so like british accent.

let me now what you think, any ideas for change are appreciated

episode 2: http://www.zombiepanic.org/forums/sh...ad.php?t=13340

[Paramore]

do people think it's good? should i bother writing more?

[TheDarkness]

It sounds like a series which could be interesting. I'd be intrested in helpin with the series.

[AceOfSpades]

Continue Mm k

[Paramore]

TheDarkness, feel free to suggest topics or settings where this can continue