ZP Alleyrun!

[Hyp-R]

So, It's bee quite a few hours.
And heres what I've gotten in one sitting:

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/1493/zpalleyrun0014tb6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/6430/zpalleyrun0018tn5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/3248/zpalleyrun0017pl3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/9741/zpalleyrun0019za4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/5286/zpalleyrun0024ll1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[NeoAssassin]

Looks pretty cool

[Knights]

Good start, lighting could be improved, maybe with a sun casting more through the openings. Some of the architecture could use some work too looks a bit odd in some spots. What's the idea behind the map? Will this just be an alleyway? Keep at it.

[Turnover]

Nice.. My only qualm is that it looks all the same, but i'm sure it won't once it's done.

[Shing-Shing]

looks nice...=)=)

[Hyp-R]

Bah,
It's quite blocky at the moment,
and i've got a long way to go.

Thought I'd show you guys.

I'm hoping its not too dark,
because i liek the level of light right now.

your thoughts on that?

[Shing-Shing]

i dont think its too dark..

i think it looks great like that=) =)

[NeoAssassin]

I think the light level looks fine. Altough in some areas it seems very bright.

[Shing-Shing]

yeah maybe too light..

as you all know its a lot more scary to play in dark =) =)

[Neiko]

I'm not going to say cons, but a pros I saw is that the textures go well together that you picked.

[Yokai]

Hey Hyp-r. Looking very fine :) My biggest con is that you used the valve Wallpaper/Spraypaint decals. There are many places online where you can find Sudo-spraypaint or wallpapers.

[Hyp-R]

Hey Hyp-r. Looking very fine :) My biggest con is that you used the valve Wallpaper/Spraypaint decals. There are many places online where you can find Sudo-spraypaint or wallpapers.

I always use the vlave logo. Atleast twice.
And was going to redo the spraypaint, and grab a texture pack
or do my own later on. It's on the todo list dont worry


And to Zergling Guy, on the last page there.
Why won't you tell me the cons?
To be honest, I don't take critiscm as a bad thing,
It shows wha t YOU find wrong with it.
And how i can IMPROVE.

We learn from mistakes,
and often require other to point them out.

So, shoot away my dear boy

[Neiko]

Ok then, not many cons, since I can't see too much of the map yet, but,

In just my opinion, it seems there are a tad too many props. And as others have said, the lightning, it seems where there IS lightning, it's a little too bright, and where there is hardly any, it's a tad dark. (Ones I can see and think of on a friday after school =p)

[Hyp-R]

Too many props you say.
We'll IMO theres not even enough pipes and such yet.

I got more burshwork to do, which will endup with the props evening out.

But I can see where your coming from with the lighting.
And I'll post some screens up soon

Sound good?