Yokai
07-21-2005, 07:30 AM
"hm, so you say he was murdered but you dont know exactly who did it huh?" said the first detective, on the phone to a young woman. Her husband was killed, throat cutting. They had just married one another, seems almost like bad luck. The other detective, shooting darts at the board looking comfortable as if he had just woken up from a nightmare. He says he was out late last night working. The first detective named George picked up his coat and walked to the dore clumsily, almost knocking over the pot hanging on the table. He picks up his coat and asks he parnter to stop messing around.
"hm, just while i was having some fun eh?" said the detective, who's name is david, laying on the couch. he threw the last dart, with a dead on bullseye. He picked up his coat from the couch he was shooting the darts from.
When they got into the small condo where he had been murdered, they saw the young woman, so upset she looked as pale as if she had died herself.
"The poor girl," said Goerge "David, take a look around for evidence while i talk to her about what she knows."
David walked into the the murder scene, dead body and all. From the wormth of the body, he could tell what time he was murdered. It was slightly warm, meaning the murder could have only been about 15 minuites ago. The strange thing about the body was the markings on his neck. They looked almost jagged, almost as if they were some stitchings on his neck. He had finaly found out whe happened when he found bloodly dental floss in the top shelf in the womans closet. He was ready, and knew she was guilty of murder.
"Hm, seems that we will have to let you go for now untill tomarrow. we'll keep in touch." said Goerge, almost positive that she wasnt guilty of anything.
"no, we will end this now, i dont feel like coming in tomarrow. You are guilty of murder and i have the evidence. First thing i noticed was the scare on his neck, very missed shaped and very un even." David stated while moving closer to the young woman. "Definatly not from a knife, and i found some dental floss wire in your closet."
"surely your kidding, nobody could cut someones throat with dental floss, its too weak and it would break." Goerge muttered in a almost bitter tone.
"The warmth of the body, he was killed about 15 minuites ago, which means there is still some evidence laying around because there is no way they could have put it somewhere in the time between the call we got and the time he was killed. Young lady, do you always hold your bag so tight?" Her eyes opened wide, with frieght in her face. "Or is it because there is something in there, that you just dont want us to see. I susspect it little peices of metal, along with liquid poisin. right?" A long silence went through the air. "shall i explain how i found out about the poisin? around the neck has a bit of purple tint, as in something poisonis had entered through the cut, using the bits of metal, you cut a whole through each peice, stuck the wire through and the rest is pretty simple."
"Let us see in the ba---" Goerge was saying untill she interupted.
"He blackmailed me, he wanted a devorce already and said if i didnt let him claim the room he would kill me. so --"
"Natuarly you made your move first" said David "You killed him before he killed you"
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The next day, with the case been solved, it seemed just one of those days the unexpecting happens.
The phone in the office rings once, then just stops. Then, 5 minuites later, it rings again. Goerge answers feircly yelling into the phone "hello, what may the problem be?" David, yet again shooting darts into the board.
"She was found what? in prison?" again a pause of silence while Goerge is eagirly listening to the story over the phone. David stops throwing the darts.
Goerge hangs up the phone, with his patience used up. Grabs his coat and mutters "an eaten corpse? seems almost fantasy eh? common, lets go." David shoots his last shot, missing the bullseye completely.
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To be continued and edited with some better grammer, its 8:30 am here and i havent gone to sleep yet... night!
"hm, just while i was having some fun eh?" said the detective, who's name is david, laying on the couch. he threw the last dart, with a dead on bullseye. He picked up his coat from the couch he was shooting the darts from.
When they got into the small condo where he had been murdered, they saw the young woman, so upset she looked as pale as if she had died herself.
"The poor girl," said Goerge "David, take a look around for evidence while i talk to her about what she knows."
David walked into the the murder scene, dead body and all. From the wormth of the body, he could tell what time he was murdered. It was slightly warm, meaning the murder could have only been about 15 minuites ago. The strange thing about the body was the markings on his neck. They looked almost jagged, almost as if they were some stitchings on his neck. He had finaly found out whe happened when he found bloodly dental floss in the top shelf in the womans closet. He was ready, and knew she was guilty of murder.
"Hm, seems that we will have to let you go for now untill tomarrow. we'll keep in touch." said Goerge, almost positive that she wasnt guilty of anything.
"no, we will end this now, i dont feel like coming in tomarrow. You are guilty of murder and i have the evidence. First thing i noticed was the scare on his neck, very missed shaped and very un even." David stated while moving closer to the young woman. "Definatly not from a knife, and i found some dental floss wire in your closet."
"surely your kidding, nobody could cut someones throat with dental floss, its too weak and it would break." Goerge muttered in a almost bitter tone.
"The warmth of the body, he was killed about 15 minuites ago, which means there is still some evidence laying around because there is no way they could have put it somewhere in the time between the call we got and the time he was killed. Young lady, do you always hold your bag so tight?" Her eyes opened wide, with frieght in her face. "Or is it because there is something in there, that you just dont want us to see. I susspect it little peices of metal, along with liquid poisin. right?" A long silence went through the air. "shall i explain how i found out about the poisin? around the neck has a bit of purple tint, as in something poisonis had entered through the cut, using the bits of metal, you cut a whole through each peice, stuck the wire through and the rest is pretty simple."
"Let us see in the ba---" Goerge was saying untill she interupted.
"He blackmailed me, he wanted a devorce already and said if i didnt let him claim the room he would kill me. so --"
"Natuarly you made your move first" said David "You killed him before he killed you"
-- ---------------------------------------------
The next day, with the case been solved, it seemed just one of those days the unexpecting happens.
The phone in the office rings once, then just stops. Then, 5 minuites later, it rings again. Goerge answers feircly yelling into the phone "hello, what may the problem be?" David, yet again shooting darts into the board.
"She was found what? in prison?" again a pause of silence while Goerge is eagirly listening to the story over the phone. David stops throwing the darts.
Goerge hangs up the phone, with his patience used up. Grabs his coat and mutters "an eaten corpse? seems almost fantasy eh? common, lets go." David shoots his last shot, missing the bullseye completely.
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To be continued and edited with some better grammer, its 8:30 am here and i havent gone to sleep yet... night!