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SilenzXE
03-06-2009, 03:03 AM
.:|CHAPTER 1|:.

-{Outbreak}-

It was a dark night. Nigel Everat was driving around the city, on his way home when he heard it, a long pained moan. It was coming from the back of a dark alley. He got his torch from his car and headed off down the alley. It was even darker here then on the street. There were even more moans now, coming from in front of him. Nigel grasped the grip of his FN Five-Seven. He was not an idiot. Numerous moans could not mean anything good. He was way out of his depth. He had just made the decision to retreat, when he noticed that the moans were not just in front of him. They were coming from everywhere. He drew his gun just as a man appeared in his torch light. He noticed several odd things about him.

First, his clothes were tattered and there was blood in several places. He could see his organs poking out in places on his skin... or where it was supposed to be...

No one would go on to the streets looking like this.

Second, he was limping towards Nigel moaning loudly. And as he realized these things, his torch went out. People living near this area report that they heard a few shots fired off and screaming the next day. The police figured that their officer had been attacked by druggies, as they were thick in that part of the city. They could not have been more wrong. The zombie invasion had begun.

The next day...

12:00 AM

I came home one day to find my mother in my parents room. Yeah, right... more like all over it. Blood was all over the place, with her limbs and body on the double bed, with my dad crouched over her corpse. He looked like some crazy zombie out of Dawn of the Dead had taken a bite out of him... multiple bites really. I could see a bit of his brain poking through his head and his intestines had fallen out of his lower torso. They looked like they had been nibbled. No, screw that, they looked like several... things... had torn his guts out and started to eat as if it was an all-you-can-eat buffet.

Wait... hang on... he should be dead! I thought to myself.

I could tell something was up. And if that wasn't enough, he was eating my mothers toes with apparent gusto. I looked at her face, she looked like in the final milliseconds of life she had screamed real loud.

Suddenly, what was left of my dad's head exploded, showering me with gooey brainy stuff... and leaving me with the refreshing smell of blood.

Behind me, was my sister, Evee.

She was wearing her customary black hoody. Her black, short hair was matted, as if she had just awoken. She was wearing baggy camo trousers, and the Desert Eagle's barrel she was wielding was still smoking

"I had a feeling my boyfriends gun would be useful for something... someday." My tom-boy of a sister said.

"Well, I guess I must thank you for ending dad's gluttony. If you hadn't I would have been next." I said.

Evee stared at me. "What now?" She asked, curiously.

"I have a shower." I said. I wasn't joking. My father's brain had begun to rot a while ago, for it was the middle of summer, and humidity was high.

"Yes Rachael, go have a shower before your stink forces we to waste you." She said this lightly, with a smile.

I ran to the bathroom and looked in the mirror. The damage to my hair wasn't too bad... it still was blonde and long, and my face which many had referred to as "Cute" was fine... not that I really cared. I didn't really care much for my looks. As long as my friends respected and liked me for who I was I didn't really mind how I looked.

I enjoyed the shower immensely and after, discussed with Evee what we should do now.

"What shall we do now?" Evee asked.

I was 2 years older than her, I was 20. So she looked up to me to get us out of this mess.

"Well... this cannot be isolated. I bet it's happening all over Sydney. Right now. We should head down to the police station and grab a few guns." I said. "But before that, go get that bag you took to camp last year... it could be useful to carry stuff in. And search the house for ammo, dad could have left some in the house somewhere."

"Sure." She said as she rushed off to find her camp bag. "Camp bag" is a loose term. Duffel bag is closer to the truth.

On searching the house we found these things:

Useful Items

Screwdriver
Hammer (Barricade's anyone?)
100 Nails (In a plastic box for safety.)

Weapons

Füri knives (Ultra-sharp high quality chef knives)
D. Eagle
Beretta 92

Ammo

6 bullets and 2 clip's for the DE
0 bullets and 0 clip's for the Beretta
Knife sharpener

"This isn't good enough" I said. "I'm going for a more thorough search of the house"

I found what I was looking for quite quickly. I found a shoe box saying "PC Maintenance" Inside were a few porno magazines. I wrinkled my nose in disgust and underneath...

... were 4 full clips for the Beretta! Neat!

I quickly returned to the lounge to a smiling Evee. She was holding a portable radio, obviously for alerting the military to their presence if need be. I deposited my clips in to the duffel bag and that's when it hit me.

We forgot the FOOD!!!

Of all the things we needed it was FOOD. And we nearly FORGOT it! Quickly racing to the kitchen, with the duffel bag of course, I found a large bottle of Coke, and 3 cans of Asahi beer for myself. I also found six 1 litre bottles of water. And after raiding the cupboards, found a large bag Chocolate Fudge Biscuits (nice), 3 large packets of Sour Cream and Onion crisps, and 1 plain. There was also a tin of our family's beloved Milo and 2 large tins of tea (we liked to be well stocked... shopping not among our family's favorite things).

We added these to our bag:

Supplies

One 2 litre bottle of coke
3 Cans of Asahi beer
Six 1 litre bottles of water
1 Kilo of Chocolate Fudge Biscuits (lots)
4 Packets of crisps (total)
One 2 Kilo tin of Milo
Two 3 Kilo tin's of Tea

"Right. We should set off before it's night. The Zombies will be out in force at that time." I said.

And with that, we set off for the Police Station...

To be continued...

NEXT CHAPTER... CHAPTER 2: Containment

impslayer
03-06-2009, 11:45 AM
a little constructive critisisim? slow down please. things are going very fast. Also, have more gore, more screaming people, landmarks (is this sydney?), and more suspense. It seems that they are well stocked with guns for a couple of young women. Also throw in a few more survivors please.
By and large a good start, keep it up.

SilenzXE
03-06-2009, 05:29 PM
Hey, thanks. Bleh, yeah, first real story ever written, I was determined to end this part quick as it was quite large already.

I wrote this late at night so it is VERY dodgy. More gore? Yeah, I will add lot's more. Screaming? Yep, that shall follow. Aye, landmarks. Suspense? I can do suspense...

... Happy?

Well stocked on guns, eh? I wanted the story to be told as it goes. I think it feels better than just telling the whole story at once. By this I mean you shall find out as it goes on (there is your suspense). For more survivors, I will do that, but don't count on there being more than 4 at any given time.

Thanks for the CC! :D

SilenzXE
03-06-2009, 08:50 PM
.:|CHAPTER 2|:.

-{Epidemic}-

12:24

We had just left the house when we heard it... a long, loud pained moan coming from down the road, and there they were. A long column of them coming down the road to ransack houses and munch on the living and the dead... there were several people running away from the zombies... towards us. They were around 7 meters behind us as we ran for the other end of the street... we just came to the corner of our street, when the people caught up with us.

The zombies were 4 meters behind them now.

We rushed towards the police station. It was a small thing, with only one entrance at the front. It had two floors, first for a computer room for checking out files on certain criminals, with 3 cells for prisoners ready to be taken to court. 1 lounge with a single TV and a radio with 5 chairs spred out around the room and a pool table. There was a kitchen next to the lounge for those that were hungry. The second floor contained weapons, ammo and armour, and had a shooting range and some beds (not their brightest idea).

We rushed towards this safe haven as the zombies caught up to the exausted people behind us. It was a massacre. The zombies surrounded them while several attempted to punch and kick their way out. But there were too many, and they were quickly overwhelmed. The sight of them being eaten was... horrendous. Blood was everywhere as the zombies threw them to the ground, chomping down on their arms and legs... the zombies tore limbs off their victims, with arteries and veins hanging off both the limb and torso while devouring them with relish. It was over in seconds, and while this happened, me and Evee raced to the door of the police station. This was when they noticed cameras placed strategicaly all around the building. Just as they reached the door, hands reached out to grab them...

2:56

I woke before Evee. She was in a bed next to mine. I got up and headed off downstairs. I realised where I was. I was in the police station.
I had been here once before when my sisters idiot of a boyfriend had been walking around with a gun (the Desert Eagle) and got cornered by a cop. He asked to see his license. He said "I left it at home."

"Let's go get it then." The cop said. "Oh alright" He grumbled. "I don't have one"

He was taken to the police station and got a $500 fine for his trouble. The next day, he got a gun license. Of course, before this he was forced to write out a bunch of forms. One of the cops told us to stay in the lounge. Evee asked the cop guarding us (so we couldn't screw with anything while we were there) if she could try out the shooting range.

"No way, kid. It would be irresponsible." He growled.

"How about a bet?" She said.

"Fine, fine... you hit a bulls eye, and you can stay there. If not, you come back here and you stay here." He said, grinning patronizingly. His smile was quickly wiped off as Evee got 5 bulls eyes instead of one. She had beaten the top record of 3.

I headed into the lounge to find two men and a woman sitting around playing Blackjack. The man closest to the door was black, and looked Aboriginal. He had a crew-cut and was wearing some jeans, and a green T-shirt that said "Eat me" on the back. The other man was white, and looked up as I came in. He was wearing A kevlar vest over a white shirt that was stained with coffee. He was slightly pudgy, and had a brown mullet. The woman was wearing a plain black shirt. She looked extremely fit, and had brown hair tied up in a ribbon They all kept a Berreta 92, which meant there would be plenty of ammo for that.

"We took the liberty of putting your supplies in with our own." The woman said

"Get comfortable. We shall be here for a while." The white guy said. He spoke with a soft Scottish accent. "So we should introduce ourselves. I am Curtis McHartell, This woman is Kaylee Anglet and this guy is Jake Simons"

They both nodded towards us. We said "Hi".

With that over, I asked where they were keeping all the supplies.

"Gun room, second floor." Kaylee said. With that, I wend to check on them.

This is what I found:

Useful Tool Type Items

5 Sticks (broken off a tree next to the station for our own amusement)
13 small planks
15 large planks
Screwdriver x3
Hammer x2 (Barricade's anyone?)
101 Nails (In a plastic box for safety.)

Weapons

Füri knives (Ultra-sharp high quality chef knives)
Desert Eagle x2
FN Five-Seven x2
Beretta 92 x6
FN P90 x2
43 Flares (red)
Old Mc~~~~alds "food" (for luring away zombies. We tried this, and all who ate it died immediately)

Ammo

0 bullets and 5 clips for FN Five-Seven's
50 bullets and 7 clips for P90's
6 bullets and 2 clip's for the DE's
0 bullets and 17 clip's for the Beretta's
Knife sharpener

Supplies

10 Loafs of bread
6 Months supply of Dark Brown Sugar (best type)
1 Collosal bag of assorted veges
4 Bottles of 2 litre Milk
13 lambs (someone ordered lambs instead of lamb chops...)
A steak (for luring away zombies?)
13 Sausages
Half a chocolate cake (it was Curtis' birthday a few days before)
Four 2 litre bottle of coke
30 Cans of Asahi beer (They knew it was the best)
16 1 litre bottles of water
1 Kilo of Chocolate Fudge Biscuits (lots)
4 Packets of crisps (total, maybe a bit mashed)
Five 2 Kilo tin of Milo
Ten 3 Kilo tin's of Tea
1000 Sticks of licorice (someone ordered too many...)

Other

7 High end PC's (entertainment)
Left 4 Life (not by choice...)
Zombie Panic: School (again, not by choice)
A Plasma TV
Night of the Dead (no one watched this)
Commercial Evil (where did all this zombie crap come from?!)
28 Years Later (again, no one watched this)
High School Musical (this was worse than the zombies)

We now have enough to last several months...

To be continued...