MGS4Snake
11-09-2006, 01:56 PM
hello my name is MGS4Snake aKa Subzero today is a storie tat i made in twenty min tell me what you think about and if i made any erros so that way i can get better i got some ideas though :zombo:
this is where the story begins................................
Just a plain old work day on the local swat team we got a call about a bank robbery. "unit 152" I responded immediately i ran to my swat suv and went to the back fumbling for key i managed to find the right key as i grabbed the vest and gloves wondering if the assailants had automatic guns so as i looked for what i could use i got my marine issued knife my duel gold&silver desert eagles and i proceeded to put them in the holster so i was stuck on sniper or automatic hmmm..... as just remember i busted some one a week ago and confiscated there gun as my luck it was a g36 with a drum mag. I had to admit this was a purty gun and with that said i grabed my hat. when i got in the suv the clock read 3:05 when i went to go put my hand on the steering wheel i got a jolt then ever thing went black...... all the suden i was in 3rd person mode i could see my self running towrds the bank all i could hear was screaming and gun shots then this little girl ran out of the bank immdelty i threw the g36 down and grabbed the girl and told her to wait in the suv ill get her mommy and with that done i proceeded to go towards the bank this time i herd nothing then i herd "GET THE HELL AWAY FROM ME GET THE HELL AWAY FROM ME I AM WARNING YOU" than bap bap some one help me please god save me by the time i was close to the door all i saw was blood and body parts then a few people in the corner they were drenched in blood i walked over and as i got closer i noticed a arm hanging out with a glock 9 in the hand with bit marks in the arm as i walk closer i asked hey are you all right as the women turned around i turned a shade of white as looked into her eye all as i saw was hell then she started to walk towards me then i said ma'am pleas step back i will not repeat my self last chance lady i am warning you as i went to go grab for by desert eagle the little girl ran past me yelling mommy as she went to go hug her mom her so called mom took a bite right out of her shoulder as i stayed there wonder what the hell is going on more of them walked up as she consumed the little kid the kid still screaming and alive i shot one round into the things temple and at this point i aimed to the next one bap then the next bap the little girl laid there crying as I rushed over she said why did mommy bite me Mr. why i was a good girl as i picked her up in m arms i said you Okie mommy is fin e i had to make her go to sleep okie she will be alright and so will you i put her in the back of the swat suv and i noticed that there were many police and swat cars where i was and also noticed that there was a herd of them thing moving on our position so i walked up to my g36 and as i looked in the scope i noticed something there was the chief right next to me as the same look in the women's eye as he grabbed hold of me i struggled and managed to hit him with the but of the gun right in the nose he went down assuming he would not get up as i walked away i was wrong he grabbed on to my arm and at this point as you can imagine i was getting mixed feeling about this situation wondering how i got to the bank and how this is happening i turned around and shot 4 shots directly into his chest as he laid on the ground grabbing for me i shot one last time and spattered his brains out on the ground like a egg on a frying pan TO BE CONTINUED..................
this is where the story begins................................
Just a plain old work day on the local swat team we got a call about a bank robbery. "unit 152" I responded immediately i ran to my swat suv and went to the back fumbling for key i managed to find the right key as i grabbed the vest and gloves wondering if the assailants had automatic guns so as i looked for what i could use i got my marine issued knife my duel gold&silver desert eagles and i proceeded to put them in the holster so i was stuck on sniper or automatic hmmm..... as just remember i busted some one a week ago and confiscated there gun as my luck it was a g36 with a drum mag. I had to admit this was a purty gun and with that said i grabed my hat. when i got in the suv the clock read 3:05 when i went to go put my hand on the steering wheel i got a jolt then ever thing went black...... all the suden i was in 3rd person mode i could see my self running towrds the bank all i could hear was screaming and gun shots then this little girl ran out of the bank immdelty i threw the g36 down and grabbed the girl and told her to wait in the suv ill get her mommy and with that done i proceeded to go towards the bank this time i herd nothing then i herd "GET THE HELL AWAY FROM ME GET THE HELL AWAY FROM ME I AM WARNING YOU" than bap bap some one help me please god save me by the time i was close to the door all i saw was blood and body parts then a few people in the corner they were drenched in blood i walked over and as i got closer i noticed a arm hanging out with a glock 9 in the hand with bit marks in the arm as i walk closer i asked hey are you all right as the women turned around i turned a shade of white as looked into her eye all as i saw was hell then she started to walk towards me then i said ma'am pleas step back i will not repeat my self last chance lady i am warning you as i went to go grab for by desert eagle the little girl ran past me yelling mommy as she went to go hug her mom her so called mom took a bite right out of her shoulder as i stayed there wonder what the hell is going on more of them walked up as she consumed the little kid the kid still screaming and alive i shot one round into the things temple and at this point i aimed to the next one bap then the next bap the little girl laid there crying as I rushed over she said why did mommy bite me Mr. why i was a good girl as i picked her up in m arms i said you Okie mommy is fin e i had to make her go to sleep okie she will be alright and so will you i put her in the back of the swat suv and i noticed that there were many police and swat cars where i was and also noticed that there was a herd of them thing moving on our position so i walked up to my g36 and as i looked in the scope i noticed something there was the chief right next to me as the same look in the women's eye as he grabbed hold of me i struggled and managed to hit him with the but of the gun right in the nose he went down assuming he would not get up as i walked away i was wrong he grabbed on to my arm and at this point as you can imagine i was getting mixed feeling about this situation wondering how i got to the bank and how this is happening i turned around and shot 4 shots directly into his chest as he laid on the ground grabbing for me i shot one last time and spattered his brains out on the ground like a egg on a frying pan TO BE CONTINUED..................